Monday Night was the results evening of the autumn 'Article' competition, December 2024
Cruising the Canal du Midi
My submission wasn't placed. Below are the adjudicators' comments.
"There is a lot of info in this. Which is great. We step from the region to the canal to the boat, to the journey itself and this is a great flow. You lean on LTC Rolt to take us from the port of Agde to Beziers and this is all captivating.
The addition of the passion for the area form the ship’s captain endorses your feelings. And the description of the canal being ‘a linear park’ created by Pierre-Paul Riquet.
Nice, easy writing style that pulls me in and keeps me interested and I really enjoyed it…"
The article itself is in the 'non-fiction' section of my 'DannyDog Pieces' website at www.dannydog.co.uk
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